This is very good man, except that it's a bit empty for me (maybe cuz the black and white style and 8-bit music).Sorry :P
Wow you've improved a lot since your first songs! Congrats to you both :)
Some good mastering would really make this stand out!
Maybe, it's not exactly finished and this is an older version with trash drums, If you want to hear it send me a PM! I'll probably finish it soon :)
Wow hey, tune down the kick a bit, really makes the mix muddy... Also try sidechaining dude, since both melody and the kick is like fighting each other ;)
Anyway it's not bad for a beginner, keep making music :)
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